I like the bit when the dinosaurs come from the Jurassic time, and come out of the cage, and when jack has to go to jail because must have been insane to let giant powerful animals into a city.You need to make sure it makes sense, also CHECK YOUR SPELLING.
hey Brazil i like your Maori gods storey maybe next time get more writing.
ReplyDeleteI like the bit when the dinosaurs come from the Jurassic time, and come out of the cage, and when jack has to go to jail because must have been insane to let giant powerful animals into a city.You need to make sure it makes sense, also CHECK YOUR SPELLING.
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