Cons 1080.
R I think they should not drop it because 1080 because it’s killing
Native birds and other animals.
E 1080 dropped onto trees, ground the birds and other animals they think it’s food.
E 1080 is dropped into the native forest it kill’s kiwi, kea, kereru, and other animals
F I'm angry because it kill’s all native birds.
Hi it's Asher,I can't see some of your writing because the profile picture.Other than that it could be a bit more long, nice punctuation
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ReplyDeletehi there it's Cruz I can't see all of your writing please fix that and also your punctuation here is a link to my blog so you can take a look https://kaipcruzr.blogspot.com/
DeleteHi. This is a great story. Like Asher and Cruz said please fix you writing.
ReplyDeletehi this is a great story cons 1080
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ReplyDeleteI like your plan it is simple and Effective.
My feedback is that you could re read it and make sure it makes sense.
thx
good story i like the how you said that the 1080 drops in the trees
ReplyDeletehi I like it but next time make sure that it makes scene and add tittle
ReplyDeletethanks all you pepole
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